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I Write Dark Poetry

"Private Hell"

There is a place that I know
A place So dark you cannot go
A private hell where I hide
Locked in the ruin of my pride

Beneath the surface I lie bleeding
Lustful broken raging seething
Anger flashes like the storm
With no refuge to keep me warm

Yesterdays with no tomorrows
Awash in despair and sorrows
This private hell so full of pain
Where life is lived in vain

Passions burn to the touch
And I desire far too much
An appetite that's never fed
A dying heart that's never dead

Longing for you to know me
Reach me touch me show me
A way out of the world I know well
And put an end to my private hell
SW-User
"An appetite that's never fed
A dying heart that's never dead"

Ohhh how those words penetrate and my soul recognizes them well!

I hope that you find what you're looking for...a way out of the darkness and pain that consumes you. Hugs
@SW-User thank you my friend.
AlyAngel · F
The raw emotion shared here is amazing, thank you for sharing this. I too have felt the depths of this hell, and it is not a nice place to be. Hugs.
@AlyAngel thanks. It's a place I go to far too often
AlyAngel · F
@PrivateHell I understand that.
Sarabee · 41-45
I treasure your pain
I feed off your pain
I yearn for more
Give it all i am a burning pit consuming all
I am your love forever
@Sarabee uh... Okay? Lol
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
You will see the light again.
@Fungirlmmm lol. Me in a tanning bed? Perish the thought!
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
@PrivateHell just wait lol
@Fungirlmmm Only if you join me 😈
Writing is where the healing begins, very raw and full of feeling
@AuroraDwen thank you.
@PrivateHell Your welcome 😀
faith2hope4love · 56-60, F
Very well written...expression of raw emotions!!😔
@faith2hope4love Thanks. I write what I know and feel.
Peaches · F
I hope you come out on the other side a more happier [b]you.😌💕💜[/b]
BexEyes · 46-50, F

 
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