Revise the Writ

Look with difficulty to the mountains of the unknown, into the shaded valleys the clouds of muddled sounds arise making every moment a mystery..

Smoke will rise from the ash of the former walls before us.. who will clear this **** for us to build a bright future without fear?

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SinlessOnslaught · M

How do you do it? I'm only good at making things sound dark and dramatic 😂

SStarfish ·

@SinlessOnslaught because there's an art to painting mind pictures with words 🙂 you envision or feel it and then let it spill and then tweak it if you need to edit it

SinlessOnslaught · M

@SStarfish I'm trying to learn to write lyrics... I will try this. You mean you experience it in your mind, pour it onto the sheet, and then adjust it?

SStarfish ·

@SinlessOnslaught well i mostly write digitally it's easier to edit but sometimes i write on paper.. i type and write very fast so it's easy for me to "pour" words so to speak. Yeah if you have a feeling or a vision you just write what you feel or see, let it flow naturally and then revise it just a lil if it needs it

SinlessOnslaught · M

@SStarfish And then you have to make it rhyme 😩 I hate that part

SStarfish ·

@SinlessOnslaught oh i guess that part is easy for me 😊