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SW-User
Loved the story ❤ !!! Beautifully composed and passionately written, it sweeps the reader along engaging them fully in all your conflicting and powerful emotions. Well done -- please keep writing!!!
Starchild1983 · 41-45, F
@SW-User thank you so much!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I do plan on writing more and hopefully posting it again so check back occasionally 😊
sfish007 · 61-69, M
well written.. Capturing the key essence of domestic discipline.. How the lecture, the waiting, the punishment, and then being forgiven is so critical to this... Finally, once again, feeling so close to him...
Starchild1983 · 41-45, F
@sfish007 thank you so much for the positive feedback. This was my first attempt at writing a bit of a longer story, I’m hoping it keeps the reader engaged and invested in our FMC’s redemption lol.
Stephie · F
I will keep it for tonight's bed time reading. I may probably not be able to fall asleep though 😅
Starchild1983 · 41-45, F
@Stephie I hope you enjoy!
Stephie · F
@Starchild1983 Jut going through the first lines, you bet I will enjoy
Starchild1983 · 41-45, F
@Stephie ☺
Turtlepower · 36-40, M
It is very well written. Thanks for sharing :)
Starchild1983 · 41-45, F
@Turtlepower thank you! I really appreciate that ☺
JohnS79 · 61-69, M
Ouch!
Starchild1983 · 41-45, F
@JohnS79 👀
JohnS79 · 61-69, M
@Starchild1983 sounds like someone had it coming?
JohnS79 · 61-69, M
Sweet pain!!!