Short and sweet. I am looking for a couple of submissive women 18+ to read a story that I wrote and give me feedback on it.

I wrote a story in the BDSM erotica genre and I would really just like some feedback from women. I have gotten some feedback from a few guy friends but their perspective is different. You have to be willing to connect with me on telegram because I can’t send the story in chat it’s too long (about 33 pages). If kink isn’t your thing that’s wonderful, but please don’t read my story lol. It is very kink heavy.