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Erotica author looking for help.

Hi everyone.

I write erotica and I have a story I'm working on that I'd like some help on. Fair warning, infidelity is a heavy theme so if that's not your thing please stop reading.

So some background;

I have a story about a married woman who cheats on her husband with a friend of her husband's who is in the military and home from deployment.

I want it to be a short story. The first chapter is them having sex the first time in a spare room at the wife and husband's house after they run into each other on a night out.

The 2nd chapter is just after them finishing, the husband arrives and his friend goes to talk to him and say hi (husband didn't know his friend was back or at his house and the friend makes something up to explain this). The friend then excuses himself and goes back to the spare room where he has sex with the wife again with the husband close by so trying to stay quiet.

The following chapters will be them continuing an affair. The friend will always pull out without wearing a condom and will cum in various places while they have sex in wildly different positions than the wife usually does with her husband (drawing contrast between the husband's and friends physiques) until eventually the wife asks him not to pull out.

The issue I have;

I don't know how to tie this story off at the end. I want an ending that is conclusive, so the story is clearly over but also leaves the reader assuming something that might happen and maybe even leaving the story open to a sequel but not outright requiring one if that makes sense.

I'd love to hear any ideas you've got. Thanks in advance.
WindTherapy · 56-60, M
Sounds like an interesting story. I suppose you could use a re-deployment as an ending? This might leave it open to re-ignite at a later time if you so choose. But it's a quick way to an ending. 🤷‍♂️
xEroticaAuthorx · 31-35, F
@WindTherapy I had thought of this but I suppose I'm looking for a way to do it that isn't anticlimactic.
WindTherapy · 56-60, M
@xEroticaAuthorx Good point. But if you want to stir things up a bit maybe have some kind of surprise at the end?
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eMortal · M
Didn’t some dude post a story recently about this exact fetish? He was in the army too. I can’t remember his username. Maybe you can help each other.
xEroticaAuthorx · 31-35, F
@eMortal I'll have a look for the post, do you remember what group it was in?
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He can redeploy or he can announce he is getting married next week and therefore this is the last time.
Saintweezer · 36-40, M
Are we going cuckold route or?
eMortal · M
@Saintweezer I think that’s where she’s heading. At least the implicit one.
Saintweezer · 36-40, M
I can work with that but we got to put up sign posts @eMortal
xEroticaAuthorx · 31-35, F
@Saintweezer I wasn't planning on going this way with it. I have other ideas for that.
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