Conveying how I feel through poetry/song, feel free to give feedback or your opinion’

Was feeling empty and broken
Thought I healed
Then came to a realisation
That no compassion was there
That I just misled myself
Tryna please myself
Tryna relase negative energy
No longer wanted to be lonely

So

Started
Talking to 1,3,4,5 or Six guys
When time flies
I hang with one
They all think their mine
But I’ve been telling them lies
I gotta fix my ways
Ha sike it’s time to have it my way