Hi. This is my debut song

I'm thinking that you should cut out the stylised singing and try to aim for more pure notes, toning it right down and focusing on staying in key. It's too much like a parody and I say that as constructive feedback. Don't run before you can walk.

I think the main thing to work on is keeping your longer notes steady and staying on pitch. Also play around with dynamics!! The chorus could hit harder if the energy didn’t stay so flat. But the emotion you put in is nice.