Is this too soon?

I just had a brilliant idea for a British rock hit.

SIXTY-NINE YEARS:

For 69 years, she was my queen!
69 years! Not being obscene!

All of my life I've been under her rule
Amounted to nothing, feel like a fool

Sometimes when I'm thinking it takes
my mind off drinking for a spell. When
I get excited I take the time to scribble
like hell.

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Or maybe no!