Can you write songs?

Or poems or anything (good with words and lyrics basically) I could use some help here

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Lost & Found

She holds me down
- with her - sad, sad, frown
Red lipstick, white nightgown
- she is the cream - I swirl in thick
She makes me love - sound of coffee drip

I am again - that boy lost in lust
- she is my sin - she is my crutch
I shall never love - love this much
- she pulled me out - of the darkest pit
She clothed my skin - she made me fit

She took me in - when I was lost
- she brought me back from
my darkest thoughts - thoughts of suicide
- a living hell - she made the world
A world worth living well - she is my queen
- my own Jezebel - So I took to pen
Just to write her this - and thank her for
- bringing me back with a kiss

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet dude you gotta help me lol 😭😭😭

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 You can have this one just put her name at the top.

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet bro I don't need lyrics, ya know copyright issues and stuff. I wanna write my own, but it's just that my English isn't as perfect as a native speaker

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet and I could use those lyrics though but ya know idk if someone else will post a song with that same lyrics and say it was his or something lol don't want copyright issues lol

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 Just take her name and what you want her to do and count the syllables and run with it

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 I do have it posted on other writing apps

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet who is jezebel lol

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 Jezebel from the Bible.

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet so you want me to write a song about Jezebel?

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 Jezebel is a simile the poem isn't about queen Jezebel.

Who are you writing for?

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet myself, I wanna have my own songs so I could market them and play them for people

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 You want to write a love song to yourself?

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet oh lol no! Uh actually I don't know what I wanna write about

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 Find a girl that you love use her name and why you love her and put it to verse

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet so get a girlfriend?

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 Or just a girl you've fallen for write down the day dreams you have of her and the lyrics will come.

Harrystyles11 · 22-25, M

@Lostpoet see that's the thing, I can write stuff but it looks so simple like doesn't look like art, ya know what I mean?

Lostpoet · M

@Harrystyles11 My poems pretty simple but I like it. To be able to write something that'll actually makes you money takes a lot of time and work and you are asking the wrong person for help. Lol