Would you Please rate?

I wrote my first piece of piano music and I am look to see what people think (mainly from people who appreciate piano music)

It is a little choppy because it was my first recording of it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGhxU1lsbF8

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Jackaloftheazuresand · 26-30, M

I like that part around 2:36 and 4:06. The song is repetitive. The part at 5:35 was a nice change, made me think of a crystalline cave of despair.

BEHINDxTHExROPES · 41-45, M

@Jackaloftheazuresand Yes I know the song is repetetive, and I thank you for pointing that out. At the time I wrote it, I was having a big falling out with my sister. Try this one out for size.... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-jCq2Erkg0s

Jackaloftheazuresand · 26-30, M

I really like 5:37 for this one. The quality of the song has a stark difference from that point.