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I Believe In Love

The closer you get to me, the less you are able see all of me. See me from the distance but feel me close to your breathing. Make love to my senses, to my shadow, to my soul, and touch me as only lovers do. Do whisper your desire to my heart, reach for me, when I'm asleep, dreaming of you, falling apart, not being able to feel your heart beating. So, get closer, make love to me, now.
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Very nicely written with lots of astute, intimate thoughts.

[i]'The closer you get to me the less you see me'.[/i]
We can all keep people at a distance and have good reason to do so, not necessarily meaning any reason has to be a 'bad' reason but we do such by choice.

[i]'See me from the distance but feel me close to your breathing.'[/i]... makes me wonder how many people might do this without even knowing what it is they are actually doing; intimately at a distance hardly seems strange to consider, likewise, neither does to 'feel' at a distance.

[i]Make love to my senses, to my shadow, to my soul, and touch me as only lovers do.[/i]
Where 'shadow' and 'soul' are both none tangible; like the imagination, which can indeed 'touch' and those inner senses can be very powerful.

[i]Do whisper your desire to my heart, reach for me, when I'm asleep, dreaming of you, falling apart, not being able to feel your heart beating.[/i]
And all of this from a distance. The imagination itself is a powerful thing and what poets strive to enter into in order to play around with the thoughts. Without imagination our lives can be said to be a tad boring.

Well thought out and, I'm sure, full of meanings that can lead a person upon many different paths to come up with something different to what you yourself thought as you wrote this, Great read :)
MyLady · 56-60, F
Wow!!
MyLady · 56-60, F
Thank you for reading. Your words are beautiful. I hope you have your someone that loves you very much.