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September writing prompts - #9 Breaking point

Breaking Point



I’ve found a way past breaking point
It’s written in the stars
Passed down by wise folk
over years.
It never lets me down.
I think about just how it feels
every aching part
then think again about what I feel
each searing thought and pain.
I focus in and sum it up
then remember it’s not me.
Just mind and body suffering,
while soul above’s quite intact.
In fact as right as rain.
So, feeling strong I look again
seeking out the worst
the deepest cut, the saddest slight
and big it up some more.
Then supercharged, I accept
and using pain as fuel
I take my problem back to her
my higher loving friend
I ask for help
she pays me back
and mercy comes my way.
So I’m telling you
If you need help
And breaking point seems near
Follow this
and all will be
So very very clear 😀🙏😀
My breaking points usually arrive when I've pushed too far --
tired, sore and thirsty but wanting to accomplish more...
weeding too long under a hot sun without water,
brain fog sets in slowly, so one doesn't know till it's too late.
That kind of thing.

Recently, I made a resolution to stop at the first thought of stopping,
and it seems to work well.
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
That sounds wise 😀

 
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