WOW! this was powerful the way you were immersed in time. looking for clues as to when you are,
simple prose so evocative

i would read more of your efforts

@brainrapist

Wonderful story! Geez, I swear to both gad and god you look like one of my cousins. We're a Carolina Irish-Viking clan goin' back a 1000 years.

If you like, check out some of my stories and anecdotes. Add me as a friend if you like and I'll do the same.

I'd love to swap some tales and yarns with ya in the PM. My stories aren't sexual themed, just about life. No worries if you pass on the offer. Nonetheless keep writin' !!

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Wow, I got a little scared there for a second. This is great.

Interesting story. I liked the buildup for it. Thanks for sharing it.

Detail is very real. Great read.

That was an intense read.

I felt things reading this, well done!