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[b][i][c=#003BB2]Seeds, the 1St.[/c]
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[i][c=#003BB2]A man with daughters, a single dad, he is rising them.
He is, reluctantly, begining to date again.
Once, perhaps with each new lady, they tell him, just before he goes out:
"Dad, ask her if she knows how to do pancakes and homemade flan"[/c][/i]
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ravenwind4351-55, F
The new lady is a baker with a dark past?馃
CharlieZ70-79, M
@ravenwind43 Bravo! Interesting first step!
Tell us more about!
ravenwind4351-55, F
She has tried to not bake because it triggers her homicidal tendencies but now to please the girls she wonders if she can hold back and try to make it work with the new guy....or move on to the next town.. hiding from her past.
CharlieZ70-79, M
@ravenwind43 Ah谩!
(*remind me not to date a baker*)
Go on!!!
ravenwind4351-55, F
@CharlieZ Maybe she witnessed something as a child that connected rage with cooking (fire, grew up in a bad area in the back of a seedy restaurant?) Bit cliche but coukd be a path to follow.
CharlieZ70-79, M
@ravenwind43 Hmmmmmmmm...let麓s imagine.
She suspects that her mother murdered her father and burned him to ashes.

And the man麓s daughters?
Do they have some intuitive preventions about her?
ravenwind4351-55, F
@CharlieZ Oh that could be! Maybe her mother claimed her father walked out but she always suspected that her mother burned him in the commercial oven. Hmmm...this is getting grisly lol
CharlieZ70-79, M
@ravenwind43 Want a macabre detail?
The lady, when a girl, found her father麓s ring in the ashes. And wear it each time she cooks.

But the girls feel that something is strange about their father麓s date.
ravenwind4351-55, F
Oh that is creepy! Maybe that starting suspect when anytime they mention cooking or her work she gets uncomfortable or somewhat angry.
CharlieZ70-79, M
@ravenwind43 What can the girls do to warn their father?
They have no certainties, but don麓t like her.
So, may be, they set their father to meet (with an excuse) a teacher they have and like her for stepmom?
And the baker gets to know that?
ravenwind4351-55, F
@CharlieZ Hmmm. It definitely puts the teacher in trouble. Could make some grand scheme....the baker offers to do something for the school to win the girls over but her strived to be normal prove to much for her homicidal tendencies.
ravenwind4351-55, F
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