I Want You To Write A Four Word Story

A whispering rain falls.

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SW-User

a story from the responses..

[i]A whispering rain falls gently to my ears.
Wind caressing idle leaves, natures little wonder enthralls.
Drops of quiet melody, summoning me to sleep.
Sweet dreams beckon peacefulness, in slumber full and deep..

[/i]

DarkHeaven ·

@SW-User Beautiful.

hlpflwthat · M

@SW-User And were we able to create our own groups ... voila! A star would be born.

'[i]We Write Poetry Together[/i]'

Nice job, starry

SofieBell · F

@SW-User Enchanting. I love it!

hlpflwthat · M

@SW-User @SofieBell

Name it 'Nice Choice of Words?' and all of the responses are used ;)

Or all of the 4-word responses as of this moment. DId you know Sofie that it is(used to be anyway) a thing to only respond to these number groups in responses of the same number of words?

SofieBell · F

@hlpflwthat No, I had no idea. I am pretty new to SW.

DarkHeaven ·

@SofieBell @hlpflwthat @SW-User I rearranged it. Made it rhyme and gave it iambic pentameter.

https://similarworlds.com/32-Personal-Thoughts-Feelings/3403156-Natures-slumber-Natures-slumber-The-wind-caresses

SW-User

@DarkHeaven
Maybe an edit if i may suggest..
I believe that you meant to say AS not at in the second verse.

DarkHeaven ·

@SW-User Yup. Thanks.

SW-User

@DarkHeaven 🤗

DarkHeaven ·

@SW-User 🤗