Will it work?

When I started scribbling down something for my fictional story, my protagonist always ended up in having a love failure. Would this storyline help in attracting people? Confused! 🤯

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MrGoodbar · 51-55, M

One of those characters that is never lucky in love? I would say yes that would make the protagonist more endearing to the audience

Sonam76 · 46-50, F

@MrGoodbar But at end of day what if it hurts the protagonist? Would it be a less adventurous hero?

MrGoodbar · 51-55, M

@Sonam76 Not if he is successful at everything else I think

Sonam76 · 46-50, F

@MrGoodbar That would probably give a god status which is a dangerous tone. Learning from failure.

MrGoodbar · 51-55, M

@Sonam76 it shows he's not perfect and therefore more relatable. Plus if the book is successful and you write more it can be a continuing arch in the series with him eventually finding love