I Want You To Comment On My Ten Word Story

In darkness she found respite from the heat of day.

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Poppies · 61-69, F

Did they come from a UFO or from treehouse flashlights?

Poppies · 61-69, F

The light of the Martian men tugged them ever closer

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

As they levitate they seen the pods birthing their form.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

She was so much like you, I wanted you more.

YoMomma ·

I found it in the shade of rock walls bordering the cemeteries on the hillside

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

and beyond all this, in indefinite patches, were the houses where all the people lived.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

Little dancing patches of light filtered through the arching trees.

SW-User

I think o like where it's going 😜

Sophocles · 70-79, M

Only to suffer the heat of night. There's no escape.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

She came upon a spot that made her spine shiver.

SW-User

and then she died.

The end.

coolboy86 · 36-40, M

is that like in darkness she found peace from the bullshit that happend during the day

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