I Want You To Comment On My Ten Word Story

It was raining on the night he seen her cry.

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Poppies · 61-69, F

By morning the tears and the rain had ceased falling.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

He slipped in the mire, she couldn't help but laugh.

Poppies · 61-69, F

She reached to raise him,
Laughing back he pulled down!

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

He held her tight, she was stronger than first expected.

Poppies · 61-69, F

Quickly she found the ticklish spots and broke free again.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

When she looked back he was nowhere to be seen.