I Want You To Comment On My Ten Word Story

Leave off with vagabonds and pursue wise and useful conversation.

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I once nearly brought a man home who journey on trains. A hobo. He was ragged and dirty, but oh such a fine man who told tales. Vagabonds is an olden word. It smells of rags and old cheap wine and sticks upon shoulders with belongings tied in a bag. It is adventure and wishes and more. It reminds me of Mark Twain and the Mississippi. You are a desirable fellow. You and your words...

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

Thank you I theorize HoBo means "homeward bound" but have been unable to verify.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@JohnnySpot: Welcome. It may very well be. Tell me something: are you brown-haired?

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

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PoetryNEmotion · F

@JohnnySpot: Exactly. *grins and returns to writing* You do not live secluded? In a forest?

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

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PoetryNEmotion · F

You look Southern. That is fine.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

I live in Michigan, right by the bridge to Canada, there's a tunnel too : )