I Want You to Write a Ten Word Story

There was a boy who was jealous of the wind.

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Envying the elements was his fatal flaw, his great sin.

(Why do I always want to write in rhyming couplets?)

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

He cast the stone at his feet with great zeal.

@JohnnySpot A great wind blustered by...it forced him to kneel.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

The stone shattered the shale to reveal a timeless passage.

@JohnnySpot He tunneled through; by the end he really needed massage.

Wise guy.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

He found the portal safe and returned for his Mama.