I Want You to Write a Ten Word Story
I loved them. They lied. I ignored it. I cried.
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FrostBorne · 31-35, M
Meh, character development could use some work. The plot wasn't as exciting as I had anticipated and the antagonist was a bit under developed. I give it a 4 out of 10.
GreekFire · 31-35, M
@FrostBorne I prefer to show rather than tell. I'm old school.