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The clay walls bleed mercury in the pit of defiance.

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BootyCutie · 22-25, F

I like how you depicted clay walls bleeding with defiance. Clay walls were used in ancient times to fortress a city. Like the walls of Jericho.

Good Job. ❤

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

She claws at the walls awaiting verification of the resurrection.

BootyCutie · 22-25, F

Yes, the "walls" being the separation of us, and the Holy Spirit.

We're desperate for proof; of the existence of an afterlife; and of Jesus being our savior.

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

A magnificent blur of meaning devouring any and all indifference.

BootyCutie · 22-25, F

Right; a blur in communication; possible by mass media and religious beliefs, devour the unification of our planet:

We can't stay unmoved, impassive,to their powerful force.

"No divisions among men; are as unbridgeable as the chasm between the faithful and those they call infidels."

Great job. ❤

JohnnySpot · 56-60, M

Being aware of hand down error and or lifting virtue.