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Here's Another Short Story....

Shelley was looking for a new project one day, she came across a game called freeze tag. She played it for a while in her school. She was almost 13. Shelley had two friends Ally, and Dillon. Both of them were good at catching her in the game. Shelley was smart, and she knew she could catch them too, even though she was slower. Ally and Dillon loved to prank on other kids. They would leave their stuff on their friends desks. Then they would borrow their pens and notes they had written. Usually they could trick them and eventually they would laugh. Then, Shelley decided to mess with the class with them too. So they all brought a small funny stuffed animal to class. Shelley brought a bear cub, Ally, a cat; and Dillon a puppy. They said they loved to pretend they were all chasing each other. Shelley decided her new hobby would be to help her friends to make up a new game called notebooks. So what they did was say notebooks when the would finish making up a story. They shared them with each other and got a review of each one. 😀
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JamesBugman · Best Comment
You started with a theme, the game of Freeze Tag, but then suddenly switched to playing pranks on other kids, not even a sentence break.
What happened to Freeze Tag, the idea was dropped entirely.
No teacher in this classroom? They are usually the ones to poo poo an idea first. All the stuffed animals thrown in his/her desk.
Not saying your story is bad because it isn't, it is a fun read, just a little.. I guess, disorienting. :)