July writing prompt #24

Jaded Heart

Yep I’ve got a jaded heart
Empty beach and cloud so dark
It’s rained for days
Missing suns warming rays
English summer - what a lark

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Nice poem. I think Miley Cyrus's song has made "jaded" an overused word. Do you think your heart is really jaded? Do spin more poetry.

SailingSlow · 61-69, M

@PoetryNEmotion - Thank you - I think it was all a bit tongue in cheek to work the prompt 😂

@SailingSlow Okay. From what I know, your heart is just fine! :)

Magenta · F

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Outstanding photo.
Jaded heart indeed.

SailingSlow · 61-69, M

@Magenta Thankyou - 😎😂

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