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I Express Myself Through Writing

When you looked at me with your loving eyes,
Tell me, just what did you see?

When you held my hand with your loving touch,
Tell me, just what did you feel?

When you heard my voice ring out to you,
Tell me, just what did you hear?

When you buried your nose behind my ear,
Tell me, just what did you inhale?

When you closed your eyes to kiss me,
Tell me, just what did you dream?

I ask myself these questions every day
As your memory continues to haunt me.

Wishing I had just one more day in your arms
Just one more day to tell you that I love you
One more day to say………..Goodbye.

Silentwriter180
St0ut · 51-55, M
We need to remember to ask these questions before it’s tool late
SweetMae · 70-79, F
Very touching! *just one more day*
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
@SweetMae Thank you, my dear sister. xo
SweetMae · 70-79, F
This one caught me a bit by surprise - that imagery you sent, then faded it into having left you. Sweet melancholy.
“When you buried your nose behind my ear...tell me what did you inhale”

to me, excellent stuff
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
I liked the part "what did you dream" even better🙂
Sarabee · 41-45
Love you🌹
Peaches · F
[b][c=#003BB2]Beautiful✨😔💗🥀💫[/c][/b]
masterofyou · 70-79, M
I hearted this a while back, funny I didn't comment, it's very good and I kinda need this message tonight, thanks for writing this..
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
@masterofyou thank you; and my pleasure. Glad to think it was a positive part of your evening.
masterofyou · 70-79, M
@silentwriter180 Yes I tried to help a sweet person on here I met funny I was polite and tried help or give her guidance... And she blocked me... I was set back a little but your words made me feel better... Thank you

silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
@masterofyou I'm sorry about your friend, but it's nice to know that I could ease that for you. Ok can only hope that today is a better one for you. xo
:)
Just checking on you and since you love flowers & hugs, so just thought to embrace (((you))) in thoughts. 😘 🌷
Sterler45 · 36-40, M
Wonderful imagery. Can feel the passion and emotion pouring out. More please.
trackman11 · 61-69, M
Beautifully written
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
@trackman11 Thank you
Idontknowlol · 41-45, M
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
@Idontknowlol Thank you
Just lovely dear...
RJoeStarz · 46-50, M
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
@RJoeStarz Thank you
Human1000 · M
Life can be so sad sometimes...you’ve captured the feeling of loss..

 
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