Erotica story idea and poll
Poll - Total Votes: 7
Q1; Dave doesn't know. Only finding out at the end of the story and everything collapses.
Q1; Dave knows, Mark talks to him first and Dave gives blessing.
Q1; Dave knows, he suggests to a stressed Mark to see an escort and suggests Teri.
Q2; Mark is Dave's best friend
Q2; Mark is Dave's father.
You may vote on multiple answers, up to 3.
Hi all, been a while since I posted on here but I'm.in search of opinions so here's a poll for you!
I'm writing a story about a bit of a triangle... An escort and her understanding, supportive and devoted partner... and a client of hers who is connected to her partner.
For ease I'll call the connected client Mark, the female lead (the escort) Teri and her partner is Dave.
Here is some detail about what is going to be kind of a peak moment in the story;
Mark is married and so is cheating on his wife by hiring Teri. Late in the story, the wife will turn up at Teri and Dave's house to talk to Dave about her concerns that Mark is cheating on her. Dave will comfort her and try and assure her it's all ok and Mark is just stressed. Meanwhile, elsewhere in a separate part of the house where Teri has clients visit... She and Mark are mid appointment and having sex.
So;
Question 1
Should Dave; the liberally minded and supportive partner, know about Mark being a client of Teri's?
If he does he is actively lying to cover for Mark which he could either get annoyed about and then things can start to breakdown from there... Or he could be OK with it and effectively be the greatest wingman of all time, from here Dave could go onto really embrace Mark and Teri's relationship and the story could become one of cucking. Or, Dave doesn't know and his comforting and assurance are genuine meaning both Dave and Mark's wife are being cheated on and betrayed and Dave will eventually find out everything and be destroyed.
If Dave knows I'd have him know from the outset, either because Mark will tell Dave about Teri being an escort which of course he knows, and Dave can subsequently give blessing for Mark to book her... Or Dave could even suggest to Mark that he book Teri because she's an escort (maybe he's stressed and Dave wants to help... What a friend that'd be).
Second question;
Who is Mark to Dave... I'm considering either best friend or father...
Best friend could be a total betrayal of the friendship if cheating or they could become strangely bonded if Dave knows everything with him becoming a willing cuck.
Father could be borderline incestuous if Dave knows or absolute destruction if he doesn't know and finds out later... Either way the comfort scene with Mark's wife would be Dave's mother! Whether he's lying or believes he's being genuine with his assurance I feel this adds a lot of intensity.
What do we all think we'd prefer to read?
Poll contains options for both questions, so let me know.
Much love to you all!
I'm writing a story about a bit of a triangle... An escort and her understanding, supportive and devoted partner... and a client of hers who is connected to her partner.
For ease I'll call the connected client Mark, the female lead (the escort) Teri and her partner is Dave.
Here is some detail about what is going to be kind of a peak moment in the story;
Mark is married and so is cheating on his wife by hiring Teri. Late in the story, the wife will turn up at Teri and Dave's house to talk to Dave about her concerns that Mark is cheating on her. Dave will comfort her and try and assure her it's all ok and Mark is just stressed. Meanwhile, elsewhere in a separate part of the house where Teri has clients visit... She and Mark are mid appointment and having sex.
So;
Question 1
Should Dave; the liberally minded and supportive partner, know about Mark being a client of Teri's?
If he does he is actively lying to cover for Mark which he could either get annoyed about and then things can start to breakdown from there... Or he could be OK with it and effectively be the greatest wingman of all time, from here Dave could go onto really embrace Mark and Teri's relationship and the story could become one of cucking. Or, Dave doesn't know and his comforting and assurance are genuine meaning both Dave and Mark's wife are being cheated on and betrayed and Dave will eventually find out everything and be destroyed.
If Dave knows I'd have him know from the outset, either because Mark will tell Dave about Teri being an escort which of course he knows, and Dave can subsequently give blessing for Mark to book her... Or Dave could even suggest to Mark that he book Teri because she's an escort (maybe he's stressed and Dave wants to help... What a friend that'd be).
Second question;
Who is Mark to Dave... I'm considering either best friend or father...
Best friend could be a total betrayal of the friendship if cheating or they could become strangely bonded if Dave knows everything with him becoming a willing cuck.
Father could be borderline incestuous if Dave knows or absolute destruction if he doesn't know and finds out later... Either way the comfort scene with Mark's wife would be Dave's mother! Whether he's lying or believes he's being genuine with his assurance I feel this adds a lot of intensity.
What do we all think we'd prefer to read?
Poll contains options for both questions, so let me know.
Much love to you all!
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