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~Falling~ (September 2nd Writing prompt)


It wasn't a falling in amour, not sudden, uncontrollable
It was a rising. A growing into. An emotional mental pull
A rising, like your desire growing and bonding into me,
a slow flow from the cerebrum to the deep shadowed V.
The discreet sacred, pulsing into an overwhelming ache.

Like seedlings, digging deeper into the soil of our hearts.
Roots intertwined, a dance below the surface,
where whispers share secrets in the sweet hum of the core.
We were not autumn leaves that flutter and fall;
instead, a reaching, stretching toward the promise of endless sky..

The falling, was your letting go.. I, without a parachute,
as some wild, heart frantic, terror, of nothing to hold onto.
Dizzying air and swirling rush of wind whipping past.
Broken pieces scattered and strewn across the ground.
Each fragment sharp, a painful sting..

In time all the pieces gathered, transformation with wings! ✨



"Falling" - September 2nd writing prompt
https://similarworlds.com/literature/creative-writing/5385461-September-Writing-Prompts-For-the-writers-out-there
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ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Wow. Beautiful and breathtaking. I’m so glad you shared this. I love your writing! I know that rush, and that fall. Exquisitely penned. Thank you.
Magenta · F
@ChampagneOnIce Thank you so much. Been working on it and it felt great to release it! 💕
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@Magenta It does feel good sometimes. I know neither of us share everything we write. Some are too personal or not ready to be released, but I so appreciate and enjoy reading your poetry.
Magenta · F
@ChampagneOnIce No we don't, it's too personal, too vulnerable.

And I feel exactly the same about your writing. Hopefully there's more to come. ☺
Harmonium1923 · 56-60, M
That is very beautiful. Lovely imagery of rising and falling. Nicely done, my friend.
Magenta · F
@Harmonium1923 Aw thanks much, really appreciate it. 💟
Adogslife · 61-69, M
M, wow. If someone wants to see the impactful use of a metaphor or two, I know where to send them.

Impressive. 💪🏻
We could use more of this here. Thanks for sharing this piece.

Enjoy this last bit of summer.

Magenta · F
@BrandNewMan I concur, be sweet to see others make use of creative brain process.

Thank you, and you as well! 🌄
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
Yay! Yay! Yay! A dive into the unknown, letting go of worldly thoughts... wild heart's freedom 💓

Lovely writing M. 🤗
JackDaniels · 46-50, M
This is beautiful, wish i could write half as good as you. The image is perfect. 😍
Magenta · F
@JackDaniels Merci mon ami. 😘
Oh but the effort it took was far more than it should have been. Still can't seem to express as I did once upon a time.
JackDaniels · 46-50, M
@Magenta The effort you put into shows. 🤗
My entire romantic life just passed before me.
Magenta · F
@RogueLodyte Aaw.
You can borrow my wings. 😊
bookerdana · M
Why FALL in love like a trap when we car rise


Beautiful writing
Magenta · F
@bookerdanaHa. Love it. 😌
Magenta · F
@bookerdana And thank you
bowman81 · M
"all the pieces gathered, transformation with wings!"

From your lips to God's ear.
Magenta · F
@bowman81 😘
Magenta · F
@JoyfulSilence Very cool.
JoyfulSilence · 51-55, M
@Magenta

..., digging deeper into the soil of our hearts.
Roots intertwined, a dance below the surface,
where whispers share secrets in the sweet hum of the core.
We were not autumn leaves that flutter and fall;
instead, a reaching, stretching toward the promise of endless sky..

 
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