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Lady Where Have You Been

A scent of ocean with every inhale. A sun so bright and intense filled the sky with orange and yellow layers. He could see her faintly in the distance crossing the heat of the white sand. Her platinum blonde hair undulating with the cool evening breeze. She ran towards him, bounding with joy. He crouched down and she dove into his open arms. Could it be…yes
“Lady where have you been!! I thought I had lost you!”
His four legged beauty had returned. She was not lost, just roaming the beach looking for her owner.

#could it be
Very cool. And surprising. I love this. One suggestion, if I may? Remove "undulating". Use another word. Coletracer is skilled at these kind of surprise stories. You did a fine job. They require a lot of creativity.
Canuckle · 51-55, M
@PoetryNEmotion Thanks for the feedback :)
@Canuckle Yes. My cowboy friend here. He is a writer who has published many books. Who doesn't adore a cowboy/rancher?
Canuckle · 51-55, M
@PoetryNEmotion I will look for his avatar.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Awwww... 🥹💛
Canuckle · 51-55, M
@ChampagneOnIce Thank you for the feedback :)
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@Canuckle I like this one quite a bit. :)

 
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