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Some more cringe worthy writing (by me)

We are lying together breathing in the coldness of the mid-winter air. It is so cold out that we can see our breaths mingle together as we talk. " If i say i love you how long would it take to reach that star " she said. "

'It won't, your voice won't propagate through the vacuum of space. It'll just bounce off the atmosphere and vibrate around the world diminishing in size for eternity like ripples on a pond.' 'Even if we carved our names in a tree it'll only last maybe a hundred years or so and then the tree will die and decay.'

" What if we carved our love into a rock?

'Rocks decay.'

"What if we put it in sand and let the waves carry our love out to sea and it lies dormant in the bottomless depths of the ocean forever."

'Sooner or later the Sun is going to expand and boil all the oceans away.'


"But we'll still be here won't we together like this won't we this feels like forever right now maybe we'll always have this us warm and safe together like now "
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bookerdana · M

Really,its very interesting
I also read some of my old poems and cringe so funny
Lostpoet · M
@hiddenpearl It's funny how things don't seem cringe at the time, but when you read them again years later they make you cringe.
@Lostpoet iknooo 🫠 but means we evolved or maybe devolved ? Idk I wonder
Magenta · F
It is not cringeworthy. It's lovely and deep.
Lisafriend27 · 31-35, F
different but unique 😊

 
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