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MY COVER LETTER
I Moona Rahimi ( Mona ) , female , born 23 of may 1986, would like to work for your company full time or part time , except Thursdays in the afternoon, because I have history of a mental illness and need, to have my, fortnightly injection on a Thursday, or Fridays, I have a history of schizophrenia but I’m better now and have had support from NDIS , and have been on disability pension since 2009, but I am looking for a rewarding career and I am asking for a chance to work for you, I haven’t worked since 2008 because in 2009 I’ve been in and out of hospital, since , and have been healing, I have a national police check and the rights to work, certificate in my phone I don’t have a drivers license, so I can’t drive legally , but I can catch the bus or the train which is close to my house. I live at 130 morris cct Thornlands 4164 QLD. English is my second language as I also speak Farsi , I am Persian ( Iranian) and have grown up, in Australia Perth WA, I moved to Brisbane QLD, permanently in 2018 , because my sister lived here , as I live with my sister, Dr Mojgan Rahimi, ( Dr Morgan Rahimi). I speak English very well. I’m willing to work casual hours. I haven’t gotten my police check yet but I am going to get it soon, and I have gotten my covid shot, a few times.
I Moona Rahimi ( Mona ) , female , born 23 of may 1986, would like to work for your company full time or part time , except Thursdays in the afternoon, because I have history of a mental illness and need, to have my, fortnightly injection on a Thursday, or Fridays, I have a history of schizophrenia but I’m better now and have had support from NDIS , and have been on disability pension since 2009, but I am looking for a rewarding career and I am asking for a chance to work for you, I haven’t worked since 2008 because in 2009 I’ve been in and out of hospital, since , and have been healing, I have a national police check and the rights to work, certificate in my phone I don’t have a drivers license, so I can’t drive legally , but I can catch the bus or the train which is close to my house. I live at 130 morris cct Thornlands 4164 QLD. English is my second language as I also speak Farsi , I am Persian ( Iranian) and have grown up, in Australia Perth WA, I moved to Brisbane QLD, permanently in 2018 , because my sister lived here , as I live with my sister, Dr Mojgan Rahimi, ( Dr Morgan Rahimi). I speak English very well. I’m willing to work casual hours. I haven’t gotten my police check yet but I am going to get it soon, and I have gotten my covid shot, a few times.
36-40, F
