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LadyBronte · 61-69, F
@BiasForAction You're welcome. Thanks for reading. 😊
gregloa · 61-69, M
Hey, I’m jealous ☺
BrandNewMan · 61-69, M
LadyBronte · 61-69, F
@BrandNewMan Laughs. Thanks. Fewer and further between, yet once in a while, something random still happens to make me smile.
Adstar · 56-60, M
Nice Story.. 😄
Suggestion: Try breaking it up with a few parragraphs will make it easier on the eye.. A wall of text will often stop people even making an attempting to read it..
Suggestion: Try breaking it up with a few parragraphs will make it easier on the eye.. A wall of text will often stop people even making an attempting to read it..
LadyBronte · 61-69, F
Thanks.
A few things -
This wasn't written as a story. I simply and casually related a happening.
People who may choose not to read it because of the block form.... Well, that's their prerogative.
If I had written this as an actual story, there would be paragraphs as well as the core elements that make up every story.
The basic rule governing paragraphs is 3 to 5 sentences minimum. I realize the above separation of points don't meet that requirement.
Thanks for the unnecessary critique. 🤷🏼♀
Wishing you a happy day.
A few things -
This wasn't written as a story. I simply and casually related a happening.
People who may choose not to read it because of the block form.... Well, that's their prerogative.
If I had written this as an actual story, there would be paragraphs as well as the core elements that make up every story.
The basic rule governing paragraphs is 3 to 5 sentences minimum. I realize the above separation of points don't meet that requirement.
Thanks for the unnecessary critique. 🤷🏼♀
Wishing you a happy day.