Just updated my "About Me", does it come off a bit... heavy?

Everytime I spend months away from this site I'm embarrassed of my previous Bio, so I was hoping this new "About Me" might not continue the trend.

Any suggestions? Is it a bit too much all at once?

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SW-User

Yeah, it's a bit of a wall of text. I don't ever bother reading "about me" sections like that. Take a look at mine if you want. I think it's just enough info to be useful without being overwhelming.

TryhardDreamer · 26-30, M

@SW-User Good point, but I the personal stuff takes a lot of words to convey and I'd rather not keep it off the Bio.

I think I'll make a crazy short About Me, put it above the current one for an easy read, and keep the current one just for whoever wants more.