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Please comment on the poem its short, what do you think?

Perceptual distortions

My views are like bicycle wheels controlled only by I,
Capable of changing they are more constant than pi.
If not careful my panorama can end up irrational.
My reviews are not infused into me, but rather come from within as I convert the power of my perception into kinetic energy,
I talk, write and express with my feet on the pedals.

I am handed all sorts of perceptual distortions
And it’s my job to distribute the proportions,
To decide if I want to keep or throw in the nonsense pile.
Various types of stereotypes unfair assumptions.
Horn and halo effects thanks to previous performances.
Projection of own feelings attitude and attributes for self-protection purposes.
PunishedJenny · 56-60, F
Very nicely done although I am a bit puzzled by how your mutable views in so being can have a constancy greater than pi
Pureblossom · 22-25, F
@spankedjenny: Good point, I just wanted to rhyme with I😂
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