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Do you still remember your first love? Ps how is the poem?

First love

Came before all others in time and order, the first.
Helped me cross the border into romantic love.
You were the balance to the strong pull
Of my introductory to a foreign connection.
You're the additional energy that was required to introduced
Me to a new side of affection.
I felt like a spacecraft passing the Karman Line embarking
on a Spaceflight.

If I were a space explorer then you would be Andromeda,
The nearest galaxy so captivating and appealing.
Or if in the dark I was taking a leisurely walk, promenade,
And I noticed your stellar character.
Your personality a system of fixed luminescence,
Each part of you enticing me to fall in love with you.
I adored your iridescence.
DragonFruit · 61-69, M
The poem is good….nothing like what I felt, but that was many many years ago.
My first love died of breast cancer at age 49…..she had the most wonderful smile that I remember to this day.
Pureblossom · 22-25, F
@Dragon56: Thank you and I'm sorry to hear about her death.
Murksmonkey · 36-40, M
You describe it so perfectly
Pureblossom · 22-25, F
@Murksmonkey: Thanks, so it's not hard to understand.

 
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