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Dream (a poem)

Calmly stare across the sky
The clouds are floating right on by
Feel the movement of the breeze
Hear the rustle of many trees.
Smell the flower scented air
Thoughts are floating everywhere
Thoughts cascading, pushed by wind
Soon to be lost around the bend
See the way the clouds roll by
catching dreams that wouldn't die
Dream of things you wish to do
When reality is your dreams come true

Breezey

It's not perfect and I don't wish it to be. Just something I wrote a long time ago. :)
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Montanaman · M
I'd be pleased with it. 👍🤗✍🍷
SW-User
@Montanaman Thank you :)
Montanaman · M
@SW-User we are after all, our own worst critics.
So I write for myself. Please myself usually on first draft, with maybe a punctuation change.

And I'm usually like...
"Damn, that's good!" ✍🤗💞😎
SW-User
@Montanaman Hahahaha! I agree.
But... I have had people tell me how to change it, word it better, etc... and when all is said and done...then it's not mine anymore.
Montanaman · M
@SW-User Pfftf!🙄 Pish posh!
Tell ' to go write their own. 😄em
SW-User
@Montanaman LOL many of them do and sometimes, such big or not ordinary words so I cannot understand without looking them up.
Montanaman · M
@SW-User
"My Thoughts I Cannot See..."

My emotions reflect off the screen,
They pour from my eyes,
Seep from my veins,
And I'm blinded by the intensity of "feelings."
Keeping them hidden, I do my best,
But in the end,
They're exposed for all to see.
Naked and in your face,
Just like me-
Take it, or leave it.


-Montana. 😎
SW-User
@Montanaman Well, that was quite interesting and left open to interpretation! lol
I'd say it was unexpected and I like it!
Montanaman · M
@SW-User Smiles 😃😊✍
SW-User
@Montanaman You have quite a way with words.
Montanaman · M
@SW-User thank you 😊🤗

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