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Can you put two commas in one sentence if its ling ish?

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MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M Best Comment

Martin the first went on to Sw, not that there was anything special there, yet he did so nevertheless.

You can, because when you're writing, you're making up your own rules, Blossom.

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black4white · 56-60, M

@GreensCornbreadYams & @MartinTheFirst you are correct in the fact that you can use as many as you like but at the same time the sentence is not smooth (with multiple commas) its more broken and choppy.

black4white · 56-60, M

@MartinTheFirst Good job on the BA :-)

MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M

@black4white It's not always meant to be smooth, sometimes it's about delivering the message, like Helpful said, but often it's about controlling the pacing of how the audience reads it.

black4white · 56-60, M

@MartinTheFirst Know that i am not disagreeing just letting you know the results of multiple commas you deliver your message as you please.... hmmmmm ARE YOU A CONTROL FREAK!!!! :-) LOL

MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M

@black4white lol. No, I'm an artist :3