How detached are you really?
I don't know when one things starts and another begins. It's very much just one big blurry mess.
36-40, M
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I wrote a poem about how detached...
The roar of their laughter
echos in the empty hallway
as she makes her
qiet getaway.
Socializing wasn't a priority.
She retreats to
a familiar room,
sitting down on
the charcoal bench,
in front of the piano.
A solitude,
her open hiding place.
Her hands, polished and sparing,
glide over the keys
as the silence
is broken by
The vibration of the strings.
She stops.
The desire to play
leaves her suddenly.
The sorrow seeps in again
causing her glowing light
to dim and flicker.
The taste of defeat
already on her lips.
Her life feels like
a delicate, falling leaf,
at the mercy of the wind,
fluttering uncontrollably
towards the ground
like golden snow.
There it will lay forgotten.
Over time, the fragments
will scatter leaving no evidence
it was ever there.
The roar of their laughter
echos in the empty hallway
as she makes her
qiet getaway.
Socializing wasn't a priority.
She retreats to
a familiar room,
sitting down on
the charcoal bench,
in front of the piano.
A solitude,
her open hiding place.
Her hands, polished and sparing,
glide over the keys
as the silence
is broken by
The vibration of the strings.
She stops.
The desire to play
leaves her suddenly.
The sorrow seeps in again
causing her glowing light
to dim and flicker.
The taste of defeat
already on her lips.
Her life feels like
a delicate, falling leaf,
at the mercy of the wind,
fluttering uncontrollably
towards the ground
like golden snow.
There it will lay forgotten.
Over time, the fragments
will scatter leaving no evidence
it was ever there.
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Cmstars · 22-25, F
@JovialPlutonian Awwww. My first "Best Answer". THanks! :)
JovialPlutonian · 36-40, M
@Cmstars and not your last :)
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JovialPlutonian · 36-40, M
@SW-User well at you sound like you have a positive imagination:)
Carazaa · F
The last thing I want to do is get you more somber, but please be careful with shamanism it is very dangerous. You want Gods blessings and that stuff will actually pull you down words. Of course I respect your choices, but that is not going to help you in my opinion God warns about that. Love ya!
Very much in touch. As a matter of fact, reality has its boot on my throat at the moment.
JovialPlutonian · 36-40, M
@Pinkstarburst because you're a mum?
@JovialPlutonian No...because I'm a human and life isn't always kind
JovialPlutonian · 36-40, M
@Pinkstarburst well you aren't depressed yet presumably so that's a bonus lol
JustNik · 51-55, F
I’m cyclical. I’ll ruminate until I start to drown in it and then I’ll let go and float on something happy.
JustNik · 51-55, F
@JovialPlutonian balance in the universe
xixgun · M
Just emotionally. I am grounded and am aware, I sometimes just don't feel what everyone else is apparently feeling.
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Carazaa · F
time flies. Every minute is important!
Carazaa · F
@JovialPlutonian Helping people is never a waste of time. Also try to enjoy your day, talk to people and joke! It's not a waste of time. If you feel really depressed then stay home today and take good care of yourself, eat nutritiously... some protein, exercise, and maybe try anti depressants (SSRI's). 😪 So sad you're so sad!
JovialPlutonian · 36-40, M
@Carazaa I appreciate your help, I do enough now not to waste away like physically. Even eating feels meaningless when you feel without meaning.
Carazaa · F
@JovialPlutonian Yes, I understand. Just remember that food can also help. I will pray for you!
SimplyLogicalDiscipline · 36-40, F
I don't know,but I am trying to be