French girl needing help with her English assignment.

Our teacher told us to continue the ending of a story. Can somebody read what I've written and tell me their opinion ? Please ? It's urgent !

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Serenitree · F

Where is it?

Apr. 5/17
4:52 pm
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ArwenPandora · 26-30, F

I will send it to you, if you want.

Serenitree · F

@ArwenPandora: Sorry it took so long to get back. Family came home and then dinner and then dishes needed to be washed. If you'd like me to read it, please do. Just be aware, if I see errors, I will tell you. I will be honest. But I'm not into being brutally honest. I don't feel that honest has to hurt.

Apr 5/17
7:47 pm
EDT