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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

It's for a job application I'm helping a person with.

Objective:
My objective is to secure a full-time, permanent position where I can contribute my experience and skills performing manual labor, equipment operation, and roadway/highway reconstruction as a functioning member of a maintenance crew that helps Oregon communities.
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alan20 · M
I'd agree with leaving out "My objective is". Maybe you should precede "performing" with "in" or "by".