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Please correct my sentences. Are these correct and mske sense?

A little piece of advice, woman to woman.

When a guy act like he loses his interest in you, the relationship is not worth anymore.

As a woman who has value, you shouldn't hold on to that relationship anymore.
You're worth more than that.
Someone will come and loves you as you are, take you for what you are. 💕
itsok · 31-35, F
. When a guy act like he loses his interest in you, the relationship is not worth anymore.
I would remove “his”, change worth to worthwhile, and act to acts.

Someone will come and loves you as you are, take you for what you are.

Change “loves” to love.
☺️
DeecemberGirl · 31-35, F
@itsok okay, thank youuuu 💕
It’s why I keep to myself these days. Tired of not being treated well or honestly communicated with.

 
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