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I Loved Someone With My Mind, My Body, My Heart and My Soul

Take All Of Me... Please take all of me-leave no spot untouched.

Touch my soul with your kindness, your compassion
Assure me I am safe.
I long to hear

[b]I need you[/b]

Touch my mind with your gentle words and your sensual
whispers.
I long to hear:

[b]I want you[/b]

Touch my body memorizing the curves 
With your tongue, your fingertips
Leave your imprint on my skin
Your scent lingers
I long to hear:

[b]I desire you[/b]

Touch my heart with your kindness
Grasp it firmly and don’t let go
I long to hear:

[b]I love you[/b]

I want no ending, no beginning, just infinity with you.
demorcan
FIrst I must gently strum the heart strings creating a melody within that you might feel me with you always whereever my body might be. Then my words will caress you mind letting you know who I am you might see me am not as my body appears. Then I touch gently as I open my spirit to you and sahre my dreams, hopesm success snd fears that you ight knw the soul that guides the center of my being. Then if allis recpricated and there is acceptane of who I really am, the physica pleasure are icing to the cake. But with out the cake, the icing is merely sugary nonnutritious fluff which may have ataste for a few minutes, but leave oneempty and needing.
akindheart · 61-69, F
what a beautiful comment..thank you!
Harley52
Do you know how much you touch me with those beautiful words? And how much you mean to me? I do need you, I do want you, I do desire you............and I do love you. You are everything to me. You are wonderful. And always will be.......never change. You have so many friends....and they all love you. Remember that.......
akindheart · 61-69, F
how did I get so lucky to find you..our universes collided
Harley52
And they are still colliding. The stars are smiling.....especially at you!
loneone6969
How can one resist saying I need you, I need you, I desire you and I love you.
when reading your story. The arrangement or the order of it makes me want to read more and hope you write more. You are such a creative writer, this is so beautiful. Thank you for beautiful writing and sharing.
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you for the kind comments..I am not the best writer but i sure try..
kere2explore
Such a lovely and inviting verse. Your words enter the mind and like a skilled artist create stunning paintings on its canvas. Brush strokes chemical reactions...electric currents...desire mounts...
akindheart · 61-69, F
That is my intent...to create a canvas..thank you love.
kere2explore
You are an accomplished artist who uses the tools and colors of the trade to their maximum effect. xoxo
mycuzinvinni
i thought it was beautifully written i would love to desire you all the time , touch you with loving hands , kiss you with loving lips ,i need your loving touch and i think loving you would be easy . vinny
1changingheart
That is beautifully written. Fabulous, what a lucky man to have some one love them like that. I donnt mean to brag, but I will. My lover loves me like that and I her.
akindheart · 61-69, F
i heard you had a wonderful relationship...I am so happy for you...
1changingheart
Thank you, I love hear dearly!!
SleepingTiger
You have writen such a beautifyl poem... the deeepest desires you your heart enscribed for all to see...

and, possibly, for someone to fulfill.

hmmmmmmmm?

xoxoxoxo
akindheart · 61-69, F
you stir my imagination...and i adore you sweet man..
SleepingTiger
I wanted to stir your imagination... for mine was certainly churning!
XOXO
JaggedLittlePill
It seems I rated this up at some point...but never came back to comment....that is quite shameful on my part because this is wonderfully written...I know just what you felt when writing this...it makes it that much better! Bravo! ;)
Frankfarmer
You melt my heart! I could take you in my arms, so gently, so lovingly and whisper in your ear how beautiful, how sweet you are to me. And all this for a day, for a week, oh hell, for a lifetime!
habeant
I like this a lot! I'm impressed by your writing. This was a very nice piece. It's sensual, erotic, and inviting - quite lovely.
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you from the master writer himself. when i come on here, i am like afreight train and my writing resembles that. I wrote this in the vets office where i had plenty of time to think...xo
DLfrank
you have a very warm romantic poetic heart You are true beauty Thank You, and please do not stop writing.
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you so much..you are one sweet man..
DLfrank
i enjoy reading Your poetic writing very much, You are one very Sweet Woman. please don't stop... Thank You.
Harley52
I am greedy. I would take all of you in a moment.....and it would be forever. Would that be long enough? Maybe.......we'll just have to see. Won't we?
akindheart · 61-69, F
A lifetime would be yours..xo
OkCountryBoy
Wow I got her a little late.. But my ears and other parts of me perk up with such beautiful words.
So marvelously expressed and so poetic.
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you my sweet friend..xo
coolsmile
Invite me into your mind place
I will decorate your" body" with sensual nibbles that you you can not resist
hold you in my arms
akindheart · 61-69, F
Ilike that~~"invite me into your mind place" very cool.
dcsm
Very nicely done...you have such wonderful way with words... Coming straight from the heart...AKindHeart! :-) dc
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you love...I do have a pure heart..
dumbnugly
My, My such a beautiful piece. I love it. Thank You for sharing such intimate moments with us!
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you my sweet best friend..xoxo
chico30907
These words confirm why I appreciate your friendship. Again, Thanks.
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you my sweet friend..thank you..
mycuzinvinni
beautifully written you are desired by many but only one will be right for you i long to met you soon vinni
holefiller1
that was beautiful, from the heart, and with a touch of spice. love you babe.
akindheart · 61-69, F
love you back...thank you for being my friend
theheartofmemphis
I love this..its perfectly wrote!!
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you my sweet lady..you are the master of prose! love you to pieces
theheartofmemphis
love you to pieces too!!
DLfrank
that is very beautiful.. almost as beautiful as You, did You write that Yourself?
Dreampoet
That was very deep and filled with a passion that only comes from the soul...
1oldsnoopydoll
*sigh* simplicity in itself. How extraordinarily beautiful!!
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you sweetie...that means a lot..
Roets
makes one believe it almost still possible to find true love - wow
gemini66105
Wow, very touching, beautifully done..
akindheart · 61-69, F
thank you my dear friend.
skippy431
Lovely lady verry nice, well written. loved the words
Dreampoet
That is very good.
akindheart · 61-69, F
coming from the word master himself, i take that as a compliment..xoxo
Dreampoet
I just put thoughts out on paper and they ryhme. xoxo
sunguy1
You're a poet and you don't know it ;-) xx
akindheart · 61-69, F
i sure try! thank you.
36Ds
This is SO beautiful.

xo
akindheart · 61-69, F
and so are you!
PaladinOH
Beautifully written.
akindheart · 61-69, F
Hey you..i miss you terribly.

 
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