I Want Your Opinion

this is a poem I wrote on the 28th of November 2014

Please tell me your opinion of it I want if its any good

sorry for the bad image heres a link to my deviantart with a better quality image were the text can read

http://aireagoir-drage.deviantart.com/art/A-world-of-changing-hope-497083077?ga_submit_new=10%253A1417183671