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Escape

Into the night we run
Hand in hand through the forest
we evade capture
Pulses racing, sweat beading, our hearts enraptured
Clothes torn on branches, skin sliced by thorns
As if by the devil himself
His sharp fingernails and horns
A clearing in the wood
offers respite
So out of the dark
we step into the moonlight
Exhausted we collapse
Our captor eluded
Pure joy expressed, passion denuded
A stolen moment, precious time bought
Then a twig snaps

Our heads turn


We are caught.
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Very well done. There is motion and sound. What happens now?
NewKidInTown · 51-55, M
@PoetryNEmotion Thank you.
What happens next, who knows?
I wanted to leave the reader on a cliffhanger, to wonder, and perhaps imagine their own ending :)
@NewKidInTown Welcome. There could be many scenarios. Keep on writing. I liked it.
NewKidInTown · 51-55, M
@PoetryNEmotion Thank you so much for reading, taking the time to comment, and your encouragement :)
@NewKidInTown It is easy to be kind and to taste pleasures. You are most welcome.