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I Kimmygary Has A Heart Of Gold

Wishing You Were Here

im sitting in the sand on the beach
the waves are crashing as high tide come in
im thinking of you at this very momment
wishing you was here.

as a big wave crashes and the wind blows my hair
i come back to earth for a minute
seagulls fly by
wishing you was here

i stand look around no ones here
the morning is beatiful
as i wade in the water
wishing you was here

i look down as the waves and water tickle my toes
i find a sharks tooth
as the waves pull the sand back out
wishing you was here

i lay down in the sand
and look up at the clouds
as they slowly drift by
wishing you was here

i close my eyes as i listen
the seagulls.the waves.the beeze.the smell
its so beautiful.as tears roll from my eyes
wishing you was here

KimLynn

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Very nice, but you should change, "was" to 'were'.
KimmyGary · F
haha yeah i never edit i got a really sad one ill link u
KimmyGary · F
i fixed it👌
@KimmyGary: That poem you linked me was so intense! I don't think I'll ever forget it. I almost want to call in a 'health and welfare' but I won't. I know it's just a poem, but I sure hope you don't really feel that way much.
KimmyGary · F
@puck61: yeah it was a true life feeling poem
@KimmyGary: You need to pay close attention to those feelings and make your bed every morning and keep your windows clean. There are lots of things you can do to make those feelings go away. It was / is a beautiful poem, but the feelings behind it are dangerous and scary. You have a lot of reasons to keep on swinging, and I am sure there are a lot of people who love you!
KimmyGary · F
used to that is they believe rumors
@KimmyGary: I don't want to make 'assumptions' but I 'do' want you to continue giving the gift of yourself to the world.
KimmyGary · F
thst made me smile
StepDad2 · 41-45, M
@puck61: I agree 👍🏼 These are gifts for us all