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Magenta · F
You move away from me
Like the sun
in it's arc and descent
away from the Eastern shore
Yet my love remains
Like the sun
in it's arc and descent
away from the Eastern shore
Yet my love remains
PoetryNEmotion · F
Ah, Mirage is here and Starry. The poets gather....:) *whispers* descent, girl.
horrorstories · 31-35, F
The final line makes the whole perfect. Thank you.
SW-User
beautiful..
I'm embarrassed by my poor attempt after reading yours and poetryNEmotions contributions
I'm embarrassed by my poor attempt after reading yours and poetryNEmotions contributions
Magenta · F
Giggles and bows
to the true poet, PNE
and whispers
Thank you my dear
for catching
my spelling error
;-)
to the true poet, PNE
and whispers
Thank you my dear
for catching
my spelling error
;-)
PoetryNEmotion · F
@onestarrynight: Nonsense, Starry, she asked for on the cuff. You are too severe upon yourself.
PoetryNEmotion · F
@horrorstories: Is this a love that should remain? Was this person worthy of her love? Or is it a waste? That is what I wish to know...
horrorstories · 31-35, F
To each their answer. For me love is never a waste (but it's because i have plenty of love left for the ones who stay)
SW-User
I left something for you Mirage.. this morning after you answered my comment.
Magenta · F
horrors, indeed, and I as well.
onestarry, hmmm let me go look.
onestarry, hmmm let me go look.
PoetryNEmotion · F
@Mirage: I thought you might be here. I am but my words. You are most welcome. And your poetry sings too. Now your snippet is perfectly lovely just like you. *beams at you*
Magenta · F
Aaww, tis' so good to see you.🤗
PoetryNEmotion · F
@Mirage: Likewise. :)