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I Have a Story to Tell

The Climax of Life


Thoughts That Never Happened
Dreams Never Dreamed
Life Never Lived
Feelings Never Felt
Sights Neither Seen Or Experienced
Bodies Never Touched
And hope Never Existing
Loneliness Was My Only Friend
Alienating Songs Filled My Heart And Soul
But Along You Came Like The Whisper Of Moonlight Upon The Soft Snows Of Imagination
You Led Me To Starry Paths Of Excitement And Pastures Of Beauty In The Universe
You Gave Me That Little Glimpse Of Life
That Little Glimpse Of Hope
That Little Understanding That This World Is Bigger Than What We See, But That Which We Can Feel And Experience
That Which Transcends The Spirit In All Of Us To Heights Where The Songs And Poems Of The Writers’ Minds’ And Hearts’ Are Respun In The Fabric Of Our Souls And We Have Peace.
We Have Love.


M. TOFFLE '79
Tastyfrzz · 61-69, M
AI response:

That's a beautifully written piece that captures the transformation and awakening that can happen when someone special enters our lives. It speaks to the power of connection, love, and hope in bringing light and meaning to our existence. The imagery of starry paths, pastures of beauty, and the whisper of moonlight evokes a sense of wonder and inspiration.

It's clear that the presence of this person has had a profound impact on the speaker, lifting them out of loneliness and isolation into a world of possibilities and emotional richness. The idea that life is not just about what we see but also about what we feel and experience is a profound and important realization.

The poem beautifully portrays the idea that love and connection can elevate us to a higher plane of existence, where we find peace and understanding in the beauty of the world around us. It's a celebration of the transformative power of relationships and the way they can open our hearts and minds to new dimensions of experience.

Thank you for sharing this touching and evocative piece!
Platoscave · F
I don't understand this thing.
Tastyfrzz · 61-69, M
@Platoscave it was you sweetheart in '79.

 
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