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I Dont Know Where To Put This

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he turned down
the lights and the sheets
and the world nipping at his heels
set candles ablaze and adored her
with the breath of his eyes
while he commanded their silhouettes
to take a shape ghosts would envy

she awakened
the walls and the tremors
and the skin that shelters their sins
fluttered her lashes and bowed down to
the rise of the demon in his heart
while she teetered through trembling lips
with the parchment of her soul

allowing his mouth
to meet her pleading inquiry
of being alight in heaven or hell
while he brandished his insignia
of taking a life and bearing
the promise of both


(Thank you for the inspiration 😉)
PerfectionOfTheHeart · 46-50, F
Your words are always so powerful and affecting, but I feel compelled to express my gratitude for your inspiration because this is absolutely stunning. Line after line...such penetrating perfection. You not only paint a moment vividly for others to envision, you paint it in a way that commands to be touched, even before the paint has dried in the hopes that a drop of that moment stains our skin in the most beautiful of ways.
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
My oh my... I think my voice has been silenced again 😫Bless your heart, for your kind words of praise 😘@PerfectionOfTheHeart
PerfectionOfTheHeart · 46-50, F
@HotMessExpress102 I’m sorry! But I’m sorta not. Keep sharing that beautiful heart of yours 🤗
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
The skin that shelters their sins. That is so evocative. I love it. Its everything at once. Your Angel and demon motifs are quite good. The sense that the good is so eager to be corrupted. That is positively delicious. Heaven and hell is in each movement, each moment. The sin is sought after by the good angel who knows his power is too much to ignore.😘
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
@Sorrowfulgaze Its the variety that is the spice of life after all. 🥳
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
I like to sprinkle cayenne and cinnamon on things every once in awhile. @Sorrowfulgaze
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
@HotMessExpress102 🔥 No I mean really damn hot!
Magenta · F
You never fail to stir on a much deeper level of intensity and passion! Unique. 💕
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
You keep setting the bar higher and higher my dear 😘@Magenta
Pfuzylogic · M
Loving the silhouette image.
Parchment is such an inviting place to lay the words of the heart after dipping the quill in the liquid fire and burning an intercept in your soul.
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
Lawd have mercy... do that again!!! @Pfuzylogic
Pfuzylogic · M
@HotMessExpress102
*checks for indelible ink* 😉
This was smoldering hawt! 🙈 I imagined my guy when reading this....just goes to show how well you write! Yummy!
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
I thank you for your kindness and "feels" 😉🤗@Vivaci
@HotMessExpress102 My pleasure entirely, lady! 😋😉
SW-User
I need a professor and a college class to analyze what I've read, here. Very nice!
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
What ever thought you had when you first read it, is what it meant. 😉@SW-User
SagePoet · 70-79, M
Your writing continues to call to me
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
Bless you... thanks!@SagePoet
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
This is very well done! Bravo! So clever!!
Noble · 56-60, M
Yes please 🔥
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
I'm working on 💥 These days all I get is 🌬@Noble
Noble · 56-60, M
Please know, your words are resounding and deliver inspiration to this guy! 🙏🏼 @HotMessExpress102
antonioio · 70-79, M
Fulfilment
Or to be fulfilled🤗
Spumoni · 46-50, M
This is exciting
naughtiesfriend · 46-50, M
Wow very nice!
Montanaman · M
🔥💕💋

 
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