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I Crave Junk Food

There are no Cheez-its left in this house. I think I may die.

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rckt148 · 61-69, M

Here lies another soul taken from us way to soon
if there had only been Cheez-its in that first aid kit
instead of all those useless gause and bandages

SomeMichGuy · M

@rckt148 yes...yes!

Here lies a young woman,
Taken too soon;
The lack of more Cheez-Its
Gave her this doom.

Some tried to revive her,
As others prayed;
But Band-aids and gauze pads
Failed her that day.

So heed ye the lesson,
Reading this stone:
If you find some Cheez-Its...
LEAVE THEM ALONE!

rckt148 · 61-69, M

@SomeMichGuy 😂 Pretty good
I wasn't trying to rhyme ,just be cute /funny
but you did an excellent job with it
Have a good one

SomeMichGuy · M

@rckt148 hey, you inspired me! I esp. liked your idea of searching the med kit in vain for the needed Cheez-Its! lol

ty for being gracious about my taking your idea and putting my own spin on it; but your ideas inspired that 😊

rckt148 · 61-69, M

@SomeMichGuy maybe we should collaborate on a real song sometime ,,
I actually have written quite a few
sold more of them then I recorded myself
You did a killer job 👊

SomeMichGuy · M

@rckt148 well ty! I do tend to notice the rhythm & flow of poetry and esp. when something doesn't quite fit the form established...

wuiop2 · 41-45

@SomeMichGuy ...which would preclude the usage upon said victim, thereby ensuring her demise. In other words, use Cheez-Its sparingly if you are to use them at all?