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I Know We Are Spirits In A Body Not A Body With A Spirit

For Fungirlmmm’s weekly writing challenge:

These hands were made for walking
These fingers are my toes
You fill my heart with nonsense
and so the story goes
My heart beats faster every time
our twisted paths do cross.
Your chest destroys my sanity
all reason now a loss.
I wish our necks were longer
to reach across the skies
for now I have to fantasise
the bliss between your thighs

Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
Mmm I love this "nonsense" as you called it. I also love the pic you chose to accompany it.
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Thank you [@ Fungirlmmm] the photo is someone else”s from the internet somewhere from ages ago that I have always liked and has oddly just stayed with me 😊
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
@SailingSlow it is beautiful.
DragonFruit · 61-69, M
This is wonderful! 😊
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Thank you - appreciated 😊@DragonFruit
diablesse · 56-60, F
You should write "nonsense" more often. A delightful read. Thank you.
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Thank you - I will try 😊@diablesse
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SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Thank you 😊@Longslinky
SW-User
This is an incredible piece of writing, the feeling is definitely palpable while reading it!
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Thank you - that’s really helpful- this one more or less wrote itself comfortably on my 30 minute morning commute - the prompts literally ticked off the page fitting the just of where my mind was anyway so easily - perhaps the lesson you are pointing me too is toward more just letting go - thank you - I will give it a go 😊 @SW-User
SW-User
@SailingSlow Hey, if I can encourage you to push the boundaries of your comfort zone, then I give you a shove! I'm so jelly this poured out so easily for you, but I'm glad you went with your gut on the material! Please write more like this..I'm pushing you, please do...you can do it!!🎉🌟✨
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
A Carp that brings us gold coins from the bottom.
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
Catfish were used to keep Trout alive during shipping.
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@JohnnySpot ooh - that sounds good - now the salmon farmers put hake in to eat the sea weevils
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@SailingSlow woops - not hake - wrasse

 
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