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I Have Green Eyes

My eyes burn bright by the lake. The chilled and biting wind causes me to pull my coat collar closely to my neck. I have been waiting for a long time to see you, across time and vast distance.

I can see sadness in your eyes as you want to tell me something. I shield my eyes away from you as I know what is coming. I turn to walk away, but I am drawn to you always. I must go and I do. Tears reddening in my green eyes. I make my ways towards and I want to call out to you, but silence envelops. Me and my green eyes...
Candie · F
this is beautiful. it sounds like a dream.
The imagery is vivid. Everything happens for a reason. Thank you for sharing.
Sterler45 · 36-40, M
@PoetryNEmotion I suppose things do happen for a reason and thank you for your warm words. I want to convey the imagery that was building in my mind.
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SW-User
With my hands in my pockets and my coat collar high
I will travel unnoticed and unknown

Bob Dylan, Farewell
Wiseacre · F
u sound like an alien..:I am not into romance!
CHARARE · 36-40, F
love it <3

 
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